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Journey Bloomfield's avatar

Ooohh, I love this! I thought I knew where it was going but the ending made me rethink everything! Excellent work!!

Heba Hallak's avatar

Thank you so much!

Dr. Noor A Jahangir's avatar

Excellent prose. Well done.

khads's avatar

you write so beautifully

Aima Ahmad's avatar

Oh my 🫢 that took an unsettling turn. Love it 😁

Fatima El Hallak's avatar

That ending 👀🫢🫣

Alwedo🌻's avatar

Nice bookend